We were learning about to make a new animal that used to be in NZ I made a wolf because I like wolfs .
I found it easy to writing and to get the photo and my friends haped me and I love tiping.
I found it hard to found want to be but I found a wolf and I won't a cat but I like wolf so I got a wolf and they are pitty and I like wolf.
I really enjoyed making it and witting and I enjoyed founding the photo and like wolfs and I like witting and I am fast at it and I like and I can just do it and get it don and I am futs.
next time I need to do more witting and I need to make it look nice and pittey and more witting and more staff and I need it to make it more better.
Hi Hazel. I'm Holly, and I liked the way you choose a wolf because its one of your favourite animals. I also like this, because you described what the wolfs life is like and how it lives. Next time you could add some commas,or some full stops, so that your sentence is broken up a little bit more. It was fun looking at your learning and how you construct it, goodbye!
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Jodi.
I like white wolves too because they're so fluffy and big.
I liked all your description about the wolf and what happened to it.
Great learning and have a good day.